Narrative writing

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 28, 2014

One stormy night……

The Pizza Man by Kha

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 20, 2014

One day there was a pizza man he lived in a pizza shop. Someone wanted to have a burger then the

pizza man said “I don t know how to make a burger.” Everyone was getting angry because he didn’ t

know how to make burgers. On Monday he closed the pizza shop then he went to the library. He

found a cooking book. On Tuesday the pizza man knew how to make a burger now. The End.

 

 

 

Persuasive writing – 2TZ

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 18, 2014

Collingwood is the best team in the world by Jacob

In my opinion I believe that Collingwood is the best team in the world

Firstly , I think Collingwood is the best team in the world because they don’t give up. They give every 100% an example is when we were versing Adelaide. Collingwood came back from 65 points down that shows they don’t give up.
Secondly I think that Collingwood is the best team in the world because there better. There better then the most teams because they nearly beat every team even when there nineth on the ladder.

Thirdly I think Collingwood is the best team in the world because they win a lot. Because they have good pressure.

Fourthly I think Collingwood is the best team in the world because they have great players like sam dywer,scott pendurlperry, josh Thomas & ben kennedy.

I hope you agree with me.

 

St Elizabeth’s is the best school in the world! by Steve

I think that St Elizabeth’s is the best school in the world.
I like St Elizabeth’s because it has nice teachers like Miss Zonneveldt.
I have nice friends and some of them are in 1/2TZ and 1/2 SB.
Steve

 

Chickens are the best pets! by John

I think chickens are the best pets ever because they lay eggs and their babies are cute.
My first reasons why chickens are great pets is because they eat all the bugs for you but not the big one!
Secondly I believe everyone should have a pet chickens because the boy chicken wake you up early in the morning.

Third in my opinion you can get free eggs and different colour eggs .only same times they can lay eggs.

Then chickens can sometimes be cheeky and they can jump. Over they gate and they love it when you touch them on the head!

Finally I hope you agree with me!!!!

Myuna Farm

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 17, 2014

On Wednesday the 29th of October the Grade 1 and 2 children went to Myuna Farm in Doveton.  We had so much fun seeing all the different animals and learning more about their habitats.  I loved cuddling the cute guinea pigs and the fluffy rabbits.  I also enjoyed feeding the greedy goats especially when they tried to steal the bread from me.

What was your favourite animal?  Give reasons why you have chosen this animal.

Miss Zonneveldt

Myuna Farm Recount  by Rison

On Wednesday the 29th 2TZ went to myuna farm.
first, we met farmer Daniel.Then, we watched a show and farmer Daniel brought a cockatoo and a goat. finally,we had snack after snack. we went to feed the duck. and went on a train ride. then we went to see the baby animals. And we saw same guineapigs and rabbits and they were smooth and soft then we went to
see the lambs and they had zig zag furry and I saw two
lizards.

Persuasive writing

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 17, 2014

Last week in class 2HZ have been learning all about persuasive writing.   We have learnt that when we write a persuasive piece we are trying to convince the readers to share the same view point as us.  We had so much fun coming up with ideas about what we could write about.

These are some of the topics 2HZ wrote about

  • All children should have paid jobs
  • Hypercars are better than motorbikes
  • St Elizabeth’s is the best school in the world
  • Chickens are the best pets in the world
  • Unhealthy food is better than healthy food
  • Collingwood is the best football team
  • Motorbikes are better than cars

Who would like to share their ideas as to why St Elizabeth’s is the best school in the world?

Picnic Sports Day by Gloria

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on November 13, 2014

Picnic Sports Day

Today at St. Elizabeth’s school it was Picnic Sports Day. There were 4 houses there was Red, Yellow, Green and Blue house, I was in red house.

Firstly the grade 1/2’s did the Kanga sack relay and I found it very hard.

Then we played poison ball I also found that hard, in the first round red team won then in the second round yellow team won.

After that we played the parachute games I found that very easy. Then we done sprints I came third in the Finales.

Then we ate our snack, for snack I had pizza, ropes, and a lolly. I enjoyed my food.

Then we had recess, I was so exhausted.

After that we went to grab our hats and drink bottles then we went back on the oval to continue Picnic Sports day, we had to sit down up in our team/house colours

Then the grade 3/4’s and 5/6’s had a relay race.

After that Mr Andrews was going to announce the winners for Picnic Sports Day.

Green house came 4th, Yellow house came 3rd Blue house came 2nd and Red house came 1st.

I was so happy I screamed to the top of my lungs and our team got 2 trophies 1 for sprinting and the second was for winning Picnic Sports.

I enjoyed my day it was so fun and so exhausting.

The End

Meal Worms

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Posted by Miss Beadle | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on October 15, 2014

1/2SB has been very excited about welcoming our meal worms to the classroom. Each of us has our own meal worm and we are responsible for looking after it.

What are some of the facts you have learnt about meal worms?

What did you name your meal worm?

What is your meal worm’s favourite food?

meal worm

Footy Day!

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on September 18, 2014

Footy Day!

Investigation time

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on September 18, 2014

Here is some more wonderful work that was created during investigation time!

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Who wants to play Football Monopoly?

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Cross Arts

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Posted by Miss Tanya Zonneveldt | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on September 17, 2014

Dear year 1 and 2 children,

Thank you so much for all your hard work in preparation for the Cross Arts performance.  The night was a HUGE success due to your enthusiasm and confidence on stage.  The audience thoroughly enjoyed your performance and we even noticed that a lot of them were singing along.  We can’t wait to watch the DVD so we can sing and dance along as well.

What was your favourite song or act?

1/2 teachers

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